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The Sonata by yumeiro The Sonata by yumeiro
this is my very first attempt at photomanipulation, I hope I will learn more and eventually one day become good at it :)
constructive critique and suggestions are welcome ^^

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clouds: ~rushpoint-stock
field: ~Alegion-stock
model: =liam-stock
hair: =Shoofly-Stock , ~gorjuss-stock , ~Darkresources , ~Falln-Brushes
poppies: =Sassy-Stock
windmill: *flowerpowerstock
birds: *Adaae-stock
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TomAraya1981 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
1° manipolazione? :omg:
ammazza...per quanto mi riguarda c'hai ben poco da imparare ancora :D
complimenti davvero bello, forse magari un po piu di luce nel viso e nel braccio sinistro della modella (viste le fiamme), ma per il resto è una bomba :love:
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:iconeverlastingevenstar:
EverlastingEvenstar Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Seriously? This is your first attempt at photomanipulation?? That's amazing! Great job :D I also have great interest in the violin with the fire and all, since I *do* play it. ^_^ I will give you a bit of suggestions though that would make it even better (even if I'm not the best photomaniper myself). Compared to the blacks of the rest of the piece, the birds you have flying in the sky are too dark. If the black matched more like that, say, of her skirt, then it would be better. Another thing would be wear the horizon transitions from field to sky. It's a bit stright-lined, not exactly blended or natural-enough looking. You might could blur the edge a little more (or erase it a bit with a blurred-edge eraser brush), and then perhaps you could darken it a bit to make the colors a little more blended-looking. Hope that helps a little :) Nice start!
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:iconyumeiro:
yumeiro Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2009
hehe yes, this was my first attempt with photomanipulation :) I have used photoshop for quite some time, but that was my first photomanip :D

thank you so much for your suggestions, I actually never see mistakes, no matter how big they are, until somebody points them to me :D
so would you believe I haven't noticed that horizon line until you showed it to me? (and I "eeeek!"ed when I saw it :D)!
I'll be more careful the next time :D thank you again ^^ <3
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:iconeverlastingevenstar:
EverlastingEvenstar Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, glad to be of help with that then! ^_^ Have fun with it :D
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Dronevil Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2009
per essere il primo non è affatto male, anzi!
mi piace la crazione in sè e il modo in cui hai amalgamato gli elementi!
complimenti :)
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:iconyumeiro:
yumeiro Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2009
grazie mille <3
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:icondronevil:
Dronevil Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2009
figurati :aww:
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