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this is my very first attempt at photomanipulation, I hope I will learn more and eventually one day become good at it :)
constructive critique and suggestions are welcome ^^

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clouds: ~rushpoint-stock
field: ~Alegion-stock
model: =liam-stock
hair: =Shoofly-Stock , ~gorjuss-stock , ~Darkresources , ~Falln-Brushes
poppies: =Sassy-Stock
windmill: *flowerpowerstock
birds: *Adaae-stock

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:icondronevil:
per essere il primo non è affatto male, anzi!
mi piace la crazione in sè e il modo in cui hai amalgamato gli elementi!
complimenti :)

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Don't Blame The Messenger...

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when a mistake becomes art-
:iconeverlastingevenstar:
Seriously? This is your first attempt at photomanipulation?? That's amazing! Great job :D I also have great interest in the violin with the fire and all, since I *do* play it. ^_^ I will give you a bit of suggestions though that would make it even better (even if I'm not the best photomaniper myself). Compared to the blacks of the rest of the piece, the birds you have flying in the sky are too dark. If the black matched more like that, say, of her skirt, then it would be better. Another thing would be wear the horizon transitions from field to sky. It's a bit stright-lined, not exactly blended or natural-enough looking. You might could blur the edge a little more (or erase it a bit with a blurred-edge eraser brush), and then perhaps you could darken it a bit to make the colors a little more blended-looking. Hope that helps a little :) Nice start!

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You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no telling where you might be swept off to.
:iconyumeiro:
hehe yes, this was my first attempt with photomanipulation :) I have used photoshop for quite some time, but that was my first photomanip :D

thank you so much for your suggestions, I actually never see mistakes, no matter how big they are, until somebody points them to me :D
so would you believe I haven't noticed that horizon line until you showed it to me? (and I "eeeek!"ed when I saw it :D)!
I'll be more careful the next time :D thank you again ^^ <3
:icondronevil:
figurati :aww:

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Don't Blame The Messenger...

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when a mistake becomes art-
:iconeverlastingevenstar:
Well, glad to be of help with that then! ^_^ Have fun with it :D

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You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no telling where you might be swept off to.
:icontomaraya1981:
1° manipolazione? :omg:
ammazza...per quanto mi riguarda c'hai ben poco da imparare ancora :D
complimenti davvero bello, forse magari un po piu di luce nel viso e nel braccio sinistro della modella (viste le fiamme), ma per il resto è una bomba :love:

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